Saturday, March 22, 2014

creative writing essays

My province just participated in a creative writing competition and I decided to share some of them with you. Some of these people are my students, some aren't. I did not edit them, you will notice mistakes and unrecognizable words. They only had one hour to write, but they got their point across and had some good and funny ideas. Enjoy




If you could be any animal for a day, what would you be and what would you do?

Hi, my name is Khulan. I could be cat. I am sleep a bed. I rainbow sky cow cat, horse, red apple, and green grass drave. I wear pink dress on hot day. I wear casual clothes in summer. My favorite weather, meat, jam, fish, and milk. My friends color’s white, browin, and black. I like play food ball. My friends is super. We are children love. I like warm day. I like ficher’s drave. I like listen to music.

 6th grade student


Pretend that you have been shrunk down to the size of an ant for a day. What do you do and see?

             If become ant for a day I will go shopping. I will eat bread apple and drink water eat cake a candy salad eat food. I see stone. I eat robbing a lot of candies. I scare people. Tomorrow I would like to become big. and people I never kill. Ants.

            7th grade student


If you could invent a candy what would it be? What ingredients would it have and what would it taste like?

            This candy is nice big, round but I sweets like. My candy name is mixed fruit. My candy name is mixed fruit. 
1. Ingredients: first.                 9. chocolate
2. cream                                10. potatoes
3. marrow                              11. red colour
4. fruit                                    12. yellow
5. apple                                 13. sun
6. orange                               14. star and
7. banana                              15. moon
8. chocolate
Then: pot to mix. and put 
Next - to take chape freeze. Next osillalate.

            7th grade


If you could make a new animal, what would it be like?
I could make a new animal. This animal is friendly, honest, generous, beautiful and very lovely. The animal’s name is Friho-Genebe. Because this name is friendly, honest, generous, and beautiful – all Friho-Genebe.
Friho-Genebe is look like people. It is no small and no big. It is small nose, small mouth, two hands, two legs, big eyes, and big ears. This animal color is pink, blue, yellow and green. Because child very like there colors. It has long and short hear. Friho-Genebe’s best friend is child. They play basketall, voleball, football and other toys. Friho-Genebe like help people. People love this animal. Friho-Genebe never angry. People and child in Friho-Genebe’s hearth. It like job. Friho-Genebe can does all jobs. Friho-Genebe very good buy no ba. I dream appear Friho-Genebe in our world. Our love Friho-Genebe.

8th grade student


What do trees think about?
            I think all thinks living. And they always thinking of something. For example trees think about people, children, and animals. Because people, children and animals are free. Trees can't move. Unfortunetally they fall in love with other tree, they can't meet, talk and hug. trees really like Spring and Summer. Because this time grow their leaves and people with they. They don't alone. Trees don't like Autumn, because their all leaves fall. it is very sad. Trees hates Winter because they very alone and very boring. And bad peoples chop they. for use chrismas tree, new year tree, make wooden things and fire.
            But trees really like living :)

            9th grade student


You are one of the first settlers on Mars. You have lived there for one year. Write about your first year.
                I remembered my first come to day in Mars. I, astronaut and scientist we are got off from spaceship in Mars. We will come to learn how to live in Mars. We lived in for one year. If we will can success this work, earth’s people shall arrive from earth. I beginning to think as Robinzon Cruzo. But I think Robinzon Cruzo is very lucky because he lived in nature. He has a food, water, and stay place, trees. But we first need food, and stay place. I think if we eat enough food, we shall respond other needs. Then, we are walking to looking around place. But, I see small black and circular thing in sand. I’m running to this thing. Then I took this thing. This thing as cocos as earth’s fruit. We slowly first smelled, looked, listened, and touched. Wee called fruit. We think this place ave many many trees. Then, we walking again. Walking is very boring. And I missed my family, my friends and love things in earth. These fruit wade in our way. We didn’t bring food because we believed to live in Mars. “I can”, I did someone shouted in outside. This voice is broke my think. He is my neighborhood. He bringed seed of cabbage from earth.  He successes to plan tiny seed of cabbage. Every day, our lifes has been growing new future. If Describe you in Mars asked me. My answer is this place is very warm.  There no season. No animal. No night. Always rise the Sun. We always eat food and fruit. This place is very nice. Because this place never bad things.

            11th grade student


If you were a superhero, what would be your weakness?
                Who is a superhero? Many people think this person has many abilities, incredible strength and fights for the loyal. But I think it’s completely different.
                For me “to be a superhero” -> its mean to be like a my father! Because he is the best man in the world. He is respectful, kind, honest, hardworking and can do everything.
                In Movies and cartoons, weakness of superheroes has been being family! Before I didn’t understand this. But when I see my dad’s activities I realized. He has never concealed something or diverged with “mother.” Everybody wants happiness and well-being for their family. I will take after my father now and in future. So that if I were a superhero, my weakness would be love for family or mother!
                Of course everybody think different things. Everybody is unique. For people whatever can be weakness. Its’ just my opinion.

           12th grade student